The Lost Heir:

Chapter 1

"How about," Stella snapped her fingers. "This." The girls' dresses changed again.


"Stella we've changed seventeen times already, I think we're ready." Aisha said. Stella looked at her friends, maybe it was a bit much. She sighed.

"Alright," She said. "I guess we're ready." The girls looked relieved, "Just one more thing." She snapped her fingers, and sashes appeared around their waists gemstones embedded on it. Necklaces appeared on their necks. Each had a gemstone of their favorite color.

"Stella, they're beautiful." Flora said.

"Thank you Flora." Stella said, satisfied....

Today was the Day of the Rose,a holiday in the Magic Dimension to celebrate mothers.The Specialists had left Magix to see their moms,all except for Riven.You see,his mom had left him when he was little,and he hasn't seen her ever since.

Riven walked down the paved streets and into the Magix Cafe.He purchased a cappuccino and sat down in the large green booths.He took a small sip. Delicious.He placed the cup on the table and started thinking for a moment.It's the day of the rose and I haven't seen my mom in years.He took another drink of the steaming coffee.She doesn't deserve anything from...

This chapter goes to Flora_Luna who's always reading my articles and being a fan of my story. Hope you like it, and all of you too ;)


-Everyone was surprised to see who was walking out of the shadows-
Bloom: Flora!! It's you
-She run to where Flora was, apparently it was to hug her. But all of a sudden, before Bloom could get any closer to Flora, Flora took a step back letting her know she didn't approve that. Flora looked confident but in a evil way-
Bloom: What's the matter Flora?
-she took a worried glance at her and at her not -Floras-fashion-clothes-
Bloom: Why are you dressed like this?
-Flora...

Usually people say that Mary sue is Bloom. Because she is perfect, beautiful, a princess, strong.
But Bloom is not a sue like Flora.
Of course you can say how can Flora be a Sue? But I'll explain,
Reasons why Flora Mary Sue:
She is overrated!
It has the largest fan base. She doesn't have any haters. It's every Sue's dream to have a crowd of fans who will worship you 24/7. And every time I hear : Flora is the best fairy, Flora is beautiful, Flora is sweet, and so on. Her fans are the most annoying, if you say something bad about Flora, it will start: Don't touch Flora and a lot of angry smiles....